A -- a comma is needed before and after OFFICER
1. To persist in anything undertaken
2. Maintain a purpose in spite of difficulty
The rhyme scheme of this poem is ABCB.
A: wind. B: northeast. C: brine. B: yeast.
Only the second and the last line rhyme.
After I explained, I looked at the officers face. He had his head down, but i thought he was smiling. "Uhm, excuse me Mr. Officer? Did you hear what i said?" He then looked up and i screamed. It was the thing i saw earlier. I fell to the ground, not able to get up and run. I crawled back and all the lights burst. The last thing i saw was his red eyes and teeth shining.
sorry if its not long
