Question

Write me, please, where I have mistakes.

Answer 1

Okay the first one I saw was on
4) Public funding of schools should depend on the level of knowledge of students. If students learn good, school will receive much money.

4) Public funding of schools should depend on the level of knowledge of the students. If the students do well in their lessons, the school will receive money.

other than that it looks good! Good Job and have an amazing day! Good luck. :D