Answer:
Number 12 Green Drive,
Arlington.
September 17, 2020.
To the P. T. A Chairman,
Arlington High.
WAYS TO ENSURE HEALTH NEEDS OF STUDENTS IN ARLINGTON HIGH
Dear Sir, the health needs of the students of this school has been neglected for too long and I decided to take a stand and bring it to your notice.
For the last six months, there have been scattered cases of cholera outbreak along the students, and there was one case with a staff. There has not been a dedicated response to this health challenge, it has been treated with kid gloves too. I believe there should be strict enforcement of hand washing in all classes.
Another health need that the students face is the unhygienic state of the toilets which has been going from bad, to worse. The students feel, rightly, I must add that there is a need for an extra janitor or cleaner to help maintain the hygiene of the toilet.
Thank you for your time.
Yours faithfully,
Andrew Chen.
It should fall on the second syllable, so pre-CIP-i-tate.
Answer:
B. An important victory for the abolition movement.
Explanation:
I majored in History
Amistad mutiny (1839) slave rebellion that took place on the slave ship Amistad near the coast of Cuba and had important political and legal repercussions in the American abolition movement.
Answer:
(1) in the coolest home in the world.
(3). there is no way on earth I would want to do that.
(7) created electricity for him to recharge his
laptop.
(8) all over the world
(10) At this point in time
(11) "smell the roses."
Explanation:
Editing is described as the process of altering the text of a document or written piece in order to make it more precise, clear, and coherent.
In the given paragraphs, the six errors related to word-choice, abstract language, wordiness, or clichés are as mentioned above. In the first sentence, the word 'coolest' exemplifies a slang while 'there is no way on earth I would want to do that' reflects the use of 'abstract language.' In sentence 7 and 8, the words 'created', 'recharge', and 'all over' demonstrates the wrong word-choice. The sentence 10 displays wordiness in the use of phrase 'at this point in time' and the last sentence in the use of 'smell the roses' reflect 'cliche.'
