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MArishka [77]
3 years ago
10

Edit for Word Choice

English
1 answer:
yaroslaw [1]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

(1) in the coolest home in the world.

(3). there is no way on earth I would want to do that.

(7) created electricity for him to recharge his

laptop.

(8) all over the world

(10) At this point in time

(11) "smell the roses."

Explanation:

Editing is described as the process of altering the text of a document or written piece in order to make it more precise, clear, and coherent.

In the given paragraphs, the six errors related to word-choice, abstract language, wordiness, or clichés are as mentioned above. In the first sentence, the word 'coolest' exemplifies a slang while 'there is no way on earth I would want to do that' reflects the use of 'abstract language.' In sentence 7 and 8, the words 'created', 'recharge', and 'all over' demonstrates the wrong word-choice. The sentence 10 displays wordiness in the use of phrase 'at this point in time' and the last sentence in the use of 'smell the roses' reflect 'cliche.'

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