Answer:
(1) in the coolest home in the world.
(3). there is no way on earth I would want to do that.
(7) created electricity for him to recharge his
laptop.
(8) all over the world
(10) At this point in time
(11) "smell the roses."
Explanation:
Editing is described as the process of altering the text of a document or written piece in order to make it more precise, clear, and coherent.
In the given paragraphs, the six errors related to word-choice, abstract language, wordiness, or clichés are as mentioned above. In the first sentence, the word 'coolest' exemplifies a slang while 'there is no way on earth I would want to do that' reflects the use of 'abstract language.' In sentence 7 and 8, the words 'created', 'recharge', and 'all over' demonstrates the wrong word-choice. The sentence 10 displays wordiness in the use of phrase 'at this point in time' and the last sentence in the use of 'smell the roses' reflect 'cliche.'
