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REY [17]
4 years ago
15

Carlos has just finished the first version of an essay he wrote for his English class. The essay is off to a good start, but he

can see that it is unorganized in spots and contains some errors in grammar and punctuation.
Which is the next step in the writing process for Carlos?

Draft
Publish
Revise
Rewrite
English
2 answers:
marishachu [46]4 years ago
6 0

Answer: Revise. Revising means to edit portions of the essay without completely rewriting it. In Carlos' case, rewriting is not necessary since it started off very well.

PtichkaEL [24]4 years ago
3 0

Answer:

Revise carlos should do in the writing process.

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