My friend, Desaha, and his sister went to their uncle's home.
Rearranging this phrase would be a little strange so I think what's best is to correct the grammar :)
REMOVED is a verb. -ED shows an action bieng done
They use the pronoun "I" in first person POV.
Bulk
Mass
Size
Volume
Hope this helps..
Highlight “They”
Rewritten; “My family says Seattle is a beautiful place to visit.” Or “My friends say Seattle is a beautiful place to visit.”