An improper grammer sentence.
That would be Logos
Ethos is credibility of the person
Pathos appeals to emotion <span />
I'd choose this dialogue to revise your sentence:
<span>“Did you hear?” I asked them. “My painting got selected! Exciting, right?” I smiled. “Especially given that I felt so incompetent at the beginning and that the competition was ruthless!”
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It feels like the option that best uses the dialogue to improve this sentence, because the other options are either too informal or just the same sentence as the original one.
I know he beats up Johnny I am trying to remember the page number..... I just know that’s its somewhere between chapters 3 and 4, if that helps.
