The paragraph doesnt flow very well because of all the simple sentences. it has a very simple rythm and the most important ideas are "<span>As a young girl, she struggled a great deal. She left home at 21. She moved to the West Coast. There, she chose to educate herself. She chose studies over security. She lived in poverty for many years. She eventually got a job teaching at university." This is because it stays on topic. Everything else really isnt important.The ideas are all spread out and really dont connect very well. TO improve this paragraph you need to connect the sentenes and change some to stay on topic.</span>
Birmingham is probably the most thoroughly segregated city in the United States.
Its ugly record of brutality is widely known.
Negroes have experienced grossly unjust treatment in the courts.
There have been more unsolved bombings of Negro homes and churches in Birmingham than in any other city in the nation
In Hamlet's second monologue, he responds to a discourse that has quite recently been conveyed by one of a voyaging gathering of players, or on-screen characters, as of late landed at the mansion. This discourse concerns the antiquated story of the fall of Troy on account of the Greeks, and the terrible murder of the Trojan ruler, Priam. The Player gives off an impression of being overwhelmed by the feeling of the scene and winds up with tears in his eyes.
A.) Dream memories and fall leaves are being compared in the simile.
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I cant believe it, I stole from the old lady doing a garage sale. she said "kids cant buy stuff from my garage sale" what a liar. I just wanted a pez candy container, there were like 50 but that one still had some left. I grabbed it and ran but I saw some very muscular man chasing me. "DONT STEAL FROM MY MOTHER!" he yelled. I ran as fast as my legs could take me. He caught me and the only thing I was thinking was, "never will I do that again"
