Although the word <em>force</em> has a negative weight, the word choice on the revised statement from the passage indicates that it is <em>less personal</em> because it means that the person's opinion, will and choice are not involved in the process. <em>Contrary</em> to the original statement that she says 'my parents <em>encouraged</em> me to register to vote.'
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