It is explosition and rising action
The correct answer is becoming an astronomy researcher
For starters, it is the only appositive phrase. It is also non-essential because the sentence conveys full meaning even if it was removed.
Chinese cultures and values in the historical context provide a narrative of the mother being a dominant force in the household, whereas the American culture and viewpoint more so promotes the idea that women and mothers are the loving and nurturing types of individuals in the family dynamic.
DON’T SAY THIS EXACTLY, REPHRASE AND MAKE BETTER, IM JUST GIVING IDEAS
The author could use more data especially for the 3rd paragraph, like about how much time is spent in community service, the author should use more data to try to show the reader the positives and negatives of the community service work
