Question

It was Sue's birthday. But her mom and dad were away. She was staying at Aunt Jane's. She felt sad. Her birthday hopes shrank.

Answer 1

  They said that Sue had always had a picnic with them. They were away though. She had always had fun with them! What would she do with her aunt Jane? She was sad because her parents were away and she could not do the fun picnic.
  She had asked what would she do with aunt Jane? Like there was nothing to with her aunt. Nothing. At all. So she began to question what she would do with aunt Jane, like it would not be as fun without her parents and just with her aunt.
  That it would be a silly birthday. Aunt Jane i think is determined to have Sues birthday to be fun for Sue. I don't think a aunt would want to ruin Sues birthday. So she is being silly and fun talking about what they're gonna do.
  At the end Sue changed her mind about her birthday not being fun. After aunt Jane said what they were gonna do Its sounded like fun to Sue. So she thought that it would be a good birthday party after all.

Hope I helped! Have a nice day. ( Sorry I did not have time for much more)