You begin with the largest to the smallest. First revise the overall structure. make sure you have introductory paragraph, followed by supporting paragraphs. then summary and closing paragraphs.
After the paragraphs are correct then you can go in and revise sentences that do not belong. either reword or remove.
The final step is the words. making sure they are spelled and used correctly
Answer:
I need a little more detail to answer this correctly sorry hun
Explanation:
Answer:
"I had finished my chore by then, so what's the big deal?"
Explanation:
Answer: D. she wants to spend time with Valerie.
Explanation:
It says in the passage, "An image of Valerie's face on the other end of the line comes into view. I haven't seen her for a good month; our schedules are both so hectic. By and by, my hatred of the State Fair becomes inconsequential compared to my desire to spend time with Val. Besides, I don't have to eat the disgusting fair food. I can simply admire it from a safe distance."
