<span>Squire
With him there was his son, a youthful squire,
A lover and a lusty bachelor,
With locks well curled, as if they'd laid in press.
Some twenty years of age he was, I guess.
In stature he was of an average length,
Wondrously active, aye, and great of strength.
He'd ridden sometime with the cavalry
In Flanders, in Artois, and Picardy,
And borne him well within that little space
In hope to win thereby his lady's grace.
Prinked out he was, as if he were a mead,
All full of fresh-cut flowers white and red.
Singing he was, or fluting, all the day;
He was as fresh as is the month of May.
Short was his gown, with sleeves both long and wide.
Well could be sit on horse, and fairly ride.
He could make songs and words thereto indite,
Joust, and dance too, as well as sketch and write.
So hot he loved that, while night told her tale,
He slept no more than does a nightingale.
Courteous he, and humble, willing and able,
And carved before his father at the table.</span>
Answer:
1. You need to separate these two sentences - <em>Mr. Chakota started</em>... and <em>They were joined</em>... - these are two sentences so there needs to be a period between them.
<em>... and former oDesk colleague Josh Brianlinger. They were joined by...</em>
2. <em>"They're going to get their books from there.</em>" - the words <em>they're</em>, <em>their</em>, and <em>there</em> sound the same but mean different things. <em>They're </em>is short for <em>they are, their </em>means that something belongs to <em>them, </em>and <em>there </em>shows us where something is.
3. <em>Your files are graded on accuracy and formatting AND you're going to need to follow Rev style guidelines.</em> - these are two sentences so you either should add the conjunction AND or separate these two sentences completely by using a period between them.
4. <em>It's important that quality is consistent. </em>- here, you need to use <em>it's </em>(short for <em>it is</em>) instead of <em>its </em>(meaning, belonging to <em>it</em>).
5. <em>Use foreign language tags for foreign language speech... </em>- this sentence doesn't make much sense so you might want to rephrase it completely
6. <em>Please, no iPads, iPhones, </em><em>or </em><em>Android tablets. </em>- here, you need to use <em>or </em>instead of <em>nor</em> because English doesn't support double negatives.
A: Mom and her sisters have decided to go on a trip together
for B it should be: His uncles and my brother were going on a camping trip
for C: the wording is just funky.
for D it should be: Both Natalia and Mike have invited us over
Hopefully this helps and good luck.
Answer:
It was late on a Saturday when I took the biggest decision of my life: I agreed with a group of friends to a haunted house to "see what the thrill was all about".
I knew that if I told my Aunt Emelda, she would forbid me from going so I decided to sneak out and meet them at a rendezvous. We were four in number, Josh, Troy, Todd and me.
Josh brought a large torch and water, Troy came with a shovel, for what reason I did not know, Todd came with a camera, and me, well, I came with sandwiches in case we got hungry.
We entered the haunted house by half-past nine and immediately we step foot on the front porch, there was this eerie feeling we all had, but we were determined to see the end of it all, so we soldiered on.
Suddenly, the torch Josh was with went off and refused to turn on, and we began to hear a screeching sound like a cat scratching on the walls, we decided we had had enough and ran off. Todd was crying, Troy was screaming his head off, but me, well, that experience will linger on my mind for a long time.
