Answer:
I would try to strictly follow the rubric and find synonyms to commonly used words.
Explanation:
If you repeat the same words in your essay it can get boring; try to replace some words with stronger synonyms. Rubrics will also tell you exactly what you need to do to get the best possible score and this is one of your biggest assets. If you can understand what the rubric is asking for then your set. I don't particularly know how you have been doing on your writing assignments but think back to what you accomplished in your writing time: did you have a different way of researching/ planning, did you use a rough draft and further better your writing using it as a model? I wish you good luck.
Answer:
It was 8am, the streets of New York seemed really busy as people were rushing to work by buses and cars. It was buzzing until suddenly an ambulance runs over a guy crossing the street.
Answer:
1 cup of butter
2 cups of white sugar
1 teaspoon of vanilla extract
4 eggs
3 teaspoons of baking powder
3 cups of flou (any flour works)
1 cup of milk
1 pinch of salt
bake for 35-40 minutes
and you have your cake
(dont forget to add frosting)
this is a vinlla cake
