Actually, [b]parentheses[/b] add additional information, and they can be ignored. Probably
The murder of JonBenét Ramsey is the first thing that popped up in my mind of unsolved mystery and murder cases. she was a young girl, only 6 years old. her family was incredibly wealthy and everything seemed normal. people still talk about her case to this day because everything about it was so odd and explanations didn’t add up, also most people think that her brother or other family members committed the crime. dont know much ab this case but i just remember watching videos on it when i was younger
he grinds his teeth together, suggesting his intolerance for fantasy
They collect the stones and put them in piles
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You did a good job with that. However, I would change "results in ozone depletion" to "results in the depletion of ozone". This would catch the eye of readers.
