INSTRUCTIONS In this assignment, you will revise the story below to create your own story an improved final draft. You will also
submit a reflection paragraph.
PARAGRAPH:On March 15, 2014, the residents of New York City buried a time capsule. Their hope was that on March 15, 2114, it would be opened and the future residents of NYC would see what life was like 100 years in the past. Locked away in the titanium cylinder were important artifacts from the present day. The objects were chosen by citizens from all walks of life and professions: librarians, teens, computer programmers, medical professionals, research scientists, gardeners, biologists, and more. Etched onto the surface of the time capsule were the words of a famous author, William Faulkner: "I believe that man will not merely endure. He will prevail….because he has a soul, a spirit capable of compassion and sacrifice and endurance." The capsule was buried with much hope for the future. Sadly, things didn’t turn out as they had hoped. By March 15, 2514, New York had become a desperate place. Something big had changed. The city was in near ruins. Citizens were terrified. Two teens – or kidz, as they were called now – were on their way home from a secret meeting. As they walked in the shadows to avoid detection, they tripped on a huge titanium cylinder. Etched into the surface were a series of scratched-out words. The only words they could make out were, "He will prevail." The kidz dragged the heavy cylinder into a hidden alleyway and twisted it open. The glow from their flashlights revealed what was inside. With gasps of relief, they looked at each other with hope in their eyes for the first time in years.
Make sure you do the following in this submission:
---Add at least four adjectives and adverbs. Highlight these, or use (Adj) and (Adv) to show me where you included them.
---Review the beginning of your story. Make sure it clearly introduces your characters and setting.
---Review the middle of your story. Make sure it clearly presents a conflict, increases the action, and reaches the climax.
---Review the conclusion of your story. Make sure it clearly presents a resolution and theme.
---Make sure your narrative contains at least 425 words.
---Include a reflection paragraph that discusses three ways you improved your narrative during the revision process
