This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
Your mother. Because you should be reading instead if trying to cheat. Maybe if you read it will benefit you, you cheater
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Can you reword the question?
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Might be a bug
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