Answer: No change is needed
Explanation: This is because the first one would make it seem like you can either have sand or water when you need both. The second one contradicts earlier when it says that you need the sand making it seem you don't later on. The third one sounds like it is saying you either need all the materials or time when you need all of these things. So the last one is correct. This sentence already makes sense
We would have to see the sentence to help you
In "Harrison Bergerson", Vonnegut suggests that total equality is not an ideal worth striving for, as many people believe,but a mistaken goal that is dangerous for in both execution and outcome. To achieve physical and mental equality among all Americans, the government in Vonnegut's story tortures its citizens.
That's just a little sum up of it to get you started
Answer:
We should tweak a few things to enhance your writing.
Explanation:
As I read your answer, I would give some advice to fix a few things for it to make sense. You wrote Esperanza twice, so replace the extra name with the actual word you meant to write.
Also, the lesson would be (just a little more expanded version to give clarification): Esperanza realized that being rude to others is the same as being rude to her friends, which is why she learned not to do such a thing.
Also, another tip is to read your answer out loud to yourself and figure out any other problems it has.
Let me know if I need to clarify anything! :))
