I think you forgot to write an interduction and a conclusion which states what you are trying to prove for example if you where trying to prove that you are the best and thats what you belive the reading states (sry the only thing came to mind) then you would write. "In (where you read from like a book) by (author) the theme (or what you are explaning) is that I am the best." And then add all the examples and everything and for the conclusion you would put. "In conclusion this reading states that I am the best." And by the way NEVER put In conclusion this is why I am the best. ok Good luck!
