Question

Which of the following would be an appropriate thesis? I have chosen to attend an in-state public university. Our in-state public universities offer a better education than private universities.

Answer 1

Our in-state public universities offer better education that private universities.

This is the better thesis because it provides a argument or persuasive paper guideline. The other statement is something that you would put in the conclusion of the paper from which you have chosen.

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