Use of subordinate clauses is more of a grammatical thing, and if the writer is not sure if a sentence is correct he/she may ask a peer reviewer to edit or comment on it. However, the body of the essay is a standard for every essay assigned and it should be much easier for the writer to tell if he/she is following the rules.
I personally always include:
Why You want the job
Skill lists. You never want to be a one trick pony.
Bloat about your knowledge to the job to which you're applying.
Your educational accomplishments.
And include little about yourself,( not too much bcz, the employer really wont care. they just want someone ready to do the job.)
Recover could replace salvage
Sentence variations add interest and variety to a piece of writing, improve rhythm, or help you trim wordy sentences. One sentence variation, the appositive, can even help you combine two sentences. I hope you are satisfied with my answer and feel free to ask for more if you have questions and further clarifications about the said questions <span>
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