Your best handwriting isn't going to matter, especially when your doing things virtually. Complete sentences are always asked of you when you are writing almost anything ESPECIALLY in an essay. Complete sentences are usually VERY important to your teachers. Spelling everything correctly is also very important although there should be some leniency. and indenting your paragraphs is important that way you can differentiate when your writing a different PP. Plus a b and d are usually always asked of you anyway!
No, it isn't. personification is giving human traits to non-humans. Foxes can already stare, but if you said "the fox spoke", that would be an example of personification.