I think the correct answer from the choices listed above is option C. The best revision that removes the informal language from the passage would be to change only sentence 2 to "This class has given me the opportunity to build skills such as answering phones professionally and using spreadsheets and databases."
Sentence 1: People know that taking tests is hard, but they will get better grades by studying.
Sentence 2:
I learned this lesson when my friend and I studied all afternoon, then aced our final exam in biology.
Sentence 3:
I suggest that if someone wants to do well, one should try studying, too.
Sentence 4: In my opinion, scoring well on it is all about how I prepare.
Answer:
d
Explanation:
expressing yourself eloquently
Answer:
the last sentance that is blue .. starts with “In other words...”
hope this helps!
