This was really great so far! Although there is a typo. (I about 15 or so.).
"Why would Mr. Yallow need to break the system?".
Please correct me if there's anything wrong!! :)
Cyberstalking could be used to find individual’s personal information or even something so harmless seeming such as their feeling or location, but it could actually impact the person greatly. With all the technology available to the cyberstalker, and the information of the individual available, it gives them the opportunity to manipulate or harm the individual, etc.
Answer:
Parallel structure. Notice the repetition of the phrase, "look to our..."
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