On Venus it rained a lot everyone was confident that it was gonna keep raining. One girl, Margot, was from earth and she knew what it was like to see sun. The other kids did not. She tried telling the kids that one day the ran would stop. They would push and shove her because they thought she was crazy and making things.
They pushed here into a closet and locked her in their. And then the rain stopped. They was in awe because they had never seen sun every body was really excited. Eventually it started to rain again. Everyone was huddled inside the tunnels.
The kids forgot about How they locked Margot in the closet. They went to unlock the closet and she was standing their. They thought she was crazy but now they knew she was right. The sun would come out. They felt awful.
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Answer:
is this in a book or something?
Explanation:
Personally, I would phrase it like this:
The choir moved the audience to tears with their beautiful voices.
