The following sentence may have an error in effective writing. The sentence or part of the sentence is underlined. Choose the be
st revision for the underlined part. If no revision is necessary, choose the first answer. When the museum authorities investigated they found several mysterious crates in the basement. Question 3 options: When the museum authorities investigated they found several When the museum authorities investigated; they found several When the museum authorities investigated, they found several When, the museum authorities investigated they found several Save
This sentence does have an error--a grammatical one.
<span>When the museum authorities investigated they found several mysterious crates in the basement.
read the sentence out loud. doesn't it feel like a run on? there isn't any pause within it, but it has a sequence of events: the authorities investigated, the authorities found several mysterious crates. you'll want to insert a comma between "investigated" and "they" </span> When the museum authorities investigated, they found several mysterious crates in the basement.
read it out loud again. you have a natural pause that helps you better understand the events and you have a comma separating the two ideas.
The last one is correct because it is clear that the author is not looking out for the personal interests of the user- i.e., live music- but is arguing that community, focus, and schoolwork are all harmed.
In my opinion it relates to athletes only because it talks about winning victory and then at the end of the poem it explains how you will soon be forgotten by saying "the name died before the man."
I may be wrong here, but I believe that the brackets are emphasising that due to China being a great economic success story it is the next global superpower.
