Read the paragraph below carefully and answer the question that follows. 1 My name is Maddox Smith. 2I am the Treasurer of the S
an Marcos High School Charity Club. 3We're having a canned food drive. 4This event is going to be off the hook and raise lots of dough for the homeless peeps. 5It's just two weeks away and I am writing to ask for your help. 6The Charity Club is planning to place collection boxes for canned food items at various local stores. 7We'd love it if you would allow us to place a bin at Shop Mart. 8All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are really, super poor. Which of the following would be most helpful in creating a more formal and professional tone? mentioning the request sooner better explaining the purpose for writing eliminating the informal language just removing the contractions all of the above
I think the most helpful way to create a more formal and professional tone is to eliminate the informal language.
Explanation:
The paragraph has phrases like "<em>off the hook</em>", or homeless "<em>peeps</em>" that are not accurate for a formal request. If those words or phrases are changed for more formal ones, the whole request will sound more serious and important.
