4 years ago

Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

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2 answers:

melamori03 [73]4 years ago

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Answer:

This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management. (D)

Explanation:

aniked [119]4 years ago

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<span>This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.

You should constantly try to avoid self referencing an argument, speech, or essay by using an announcement phrase like this. In order to be concise and more effective, "this essay proves that" should be taken out of the sentence completely. Then, it could stand on its own as a thesis. </span>

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