I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay.
That is the answer. :)
Answer:
1. He's tall, isn't he?
2. They're not coming soon, are they?
3. She does basketball, doesn't she?
4. We weren't at the party yesterday, we're we?
5. You can drive, can't you?
6. She did a lot of work, didn't she?
7. They must keep the kitchen clean, musn't they? ( This one's kind of hard sorry if it's not correct, but I believe it is)
8. You'll come to my recital, won't you?
9. We won't be excepted to help, will we?
10. They've started on their homework, haven't they?
11. He could just walk to school in the morning, couldn't he?
12. She wouldn't steal anything from the store, would she?
Answer:
To make phones even better, we could add holograms. Holograms that let the person you facetime stand right in front of you. So instead of having to fly around the country to see somebody, you can have them right in front of you with a hologram.
Explanation:
The mood portrayed in John Muir's "The Calypso Borealis" can be described as first very gloomy and disparate and then to joyous and relief. At first, the narrator is very discouraged because he cannot find the Calypso flower that he wants. But when he finds it, he seems very joyous and as the passage says, he "cries for joy". This means that he had been waiting and searching for a long time. Muir also uses dramatic terms like choosing to place the Calypso as a lonely flower in the middle of a bog.
Hope this helps :)
