They all look right but you might need to use a better word for Tear
Ethos.
As in appeal to ethics. It can't be logos because that is for logic and the other because those are literary devices, not appeals.
Answer:
The Giver tells Jonas that memories are meant to be shared, saying, "The worst part of holding the memories is not the pain. It's the loneliness of it" (154). Imagine how lonely it would be to never be able to share your memories with another. Much of our joy in memory lies in the sharing of it.
Explanation:
He uses a technique called enjambment. It is when you don't end your thought within a single line, but transfer it to the next line of the poem, which is evident here.