We would need the book or the story to be able to do this one.
I looked it up online and found the question related to this personal statement. It is the following:
Why does the writer need to revise the personal statement?
A. sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name.
B. sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was.
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
D. sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.
Answer:
The reason why the writer needs to revise the personal statement is:
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
Explanation:
<u>A personal statement is supposed to be a brief description of oneself in connection to the career one wishes to pursue. It should mention one's experience, education, and strengths in relation to that field. However, mentioning money should be avoided.</u> The personal statement is not the "place" to do so. Instead of sounding ambitious in a good way, talking about "good money" - as the writer did in the passage we are analyzing here - may make one sound shallow.
Answer:
Students assume that studying or memorizing is unimportant during an open book test since they can copy directly from the book. For a variety of reasons, this is a myth. Exams, for example, may have a word restriction, limiting your ability to replicate all of the information presented in the book. Instead, you must choose the most important points, which may take some time if you are unfamiliar with the subject. They may also phrase the question differently, for example, asking you to analyze or solve rather than define.
Explanation:
Answer:
B uses so few words to express its message
Explanation: