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frez [133]
3 years ago
12

Grammar check- Fix the grammar/Spelling errors in the following

English
2 answers:
velikii [3]3 years ago
7 0

Original:

1) Because if I do I will just apeal your emotions you don’t want to die young do you

Corrections:

Because if I do, I'll just appeal your emotions. You don't want to die young, do you?

Use commas to separate independent clauses when they are joined by any of these seven coordinating conjunctions. Use commas after introductory a) clauses, b) phrases, or c) words that come before the main clause.

You don't want a run on sentence. Since it ends with a question, use a question mark (?). Periods separate thoughts.

You need to also be sure the words are spelled correctly.

More Comma usage:

USE A COMMA BETWEEN ALL ITEMS IN A SERIES. .

USE COMMAS TO SET OFF NONRESTRICTIVE CLAUSES.

USE A COMMA TO SET OFF APPOSITIVES.

USE A COMMA TO INDICATE DIRECT ADDRESS/QUOTATIONS.

Let me know if this helps

never [62]3 years ago
4 0
Because if I do, I will just appeal your emotions. You don’t want to die young, do you?

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