"Ick!" Victoria groaned while shoving the empty measuring cup into her mother's hands. "That was the worst taste ever! I hate that medicine!" yelled Victoria. Her mother just rolled her eyes and continued to put the medicine away and wash the cup. Victoria had stayed home from school that day, so her mother took her to the doctor. She was told her daughter had a cold. "Go lay down and rest, darling." said Victoria's mother. "NO!!! I think I'm gonna die and its your fault mom!" yelled dramaticly by Victoria. Her mother rolled her eyes and tucked her in on the couch. Victoria fell asleep soon after, and her mother finally got some quiet time. She was dreading tomorrow when Victoria would bring home schoolwork she missed, and demand her mothers help. She sighed and said, "Tomorrows going to be a long, long day."
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<span>The Chrysanthemums” is an understated but pointed critique of a society that has no place for intelligent women. Elisa is smart, energetic, attractive, and ambitious, but all these attributes go to waste.
Although the two key men in the story are less interesting and talented than she, their lives are far more fulfilling and busy.
Henry is not as intelligent as Elisa, but it is he who runs the ranch, supports himself and his wife, and makes business deals.</span>
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Grammatical mistakes are something which can change the meaning of a sentence.
Proper usage of words, and correct grammar are the essentials for a good write up. In the sentence, ‘Instead of calling her I talked to another friend who is good at listening and feeling my pain’, we can see that although this statement seems correct it can be made prefect if we add the proper word and punctuation mark. It should be, ‘ Instead of calling her, I talked to one of my friend who is a good listener and empath.’
<u>Talking about the comma rule.</u>
The very first line of the passage should include a comma before a conjunction to separate two complete thoughts.
‘I really thought she loved me but I discovered her grave.’ In this sentence, the student should use a comma before ‘but’ which is a conjunction. By adding comma, it will help to create two totally different thoughts.
