Hello. You forgot to show the model of the community plan. The model is:
1. Plan title.
2.People involved.
3. Actions for which the plan will be beneficial to society.
4. Steps to complete the plan.
Answer and Explanation:
Plan title: Sprout.
People involved: the whole community is involved voluntarily, to start a project to plant tree seedlings in the cauças throughout the entire neighborhood.
Reasons: The plan will allow the community to become a more wooded environment, which will decrease the sensation of high temperature, in addition to providing cleaner air.
To complete the plan, the community will send representatives to buy or find sponsorship at plantation stores. There, seedlings, fertilizer, soil and all necessary material will be acquired. Another group in the community will be responsible for preparing the planting sites, while another group will be responsible for watering the seedlings.
Usher's madness begins to increase because he can hear the sound of Madeline below.
Even though his sister is buried in the basement, he can constantly hear her scratching her coffin. He was tortured by these sounds until the protagonist came to visit him so he could share his troubles with him. Usher is afraid of his 'undead' sister and of dying himself, which is why he grows crazier and crazier by the day, until he is finally killed by his own sister in the end.
This excerpt from the "los Angeles Sunday Times" (June 1899) might reflect <span>society’s discomfort with women’s emerging independence in 1899 (option A). It is suggested that the author of the book (Kate Chopin) wrote an "</span>unhealthy introspective and morbid in feeling as that sort of woman must inevitably be".
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
probably the sound of it sounds like an argument.
but not really sure, cause never took music classes before.
