So based on the given rough-draft paragraph above, the statement that would best describe the mistake the writer makes in this paragraph is that, the writer <span>loses focus and shifts to another topic. In the first part, it was talking about exercise and examples, then the topic changes to new year's resolution, then it changes again to balanced diet. The main topic of the sentence is no longer followed. Hope this answer helps.</span>
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Read the excerpt from Common Sense, by Thomas Paine. "To talk of friendship with those in whom our reason forbids us to have faith, and our affections wounded through a thousand pores instruct us to detest, is madness and folly.
This is best summarized by the third statement. Although the first statement originally looks like the correct answer, if you pay attention to his wording, he says that they will not reconcile while they are fighting, and that their work will become undone by quarrels. The third statement is the most correct.Read the excerpt from Common Sense, by Thomas Paine. "To talk of friendship with those in whom our reason forbids us to have faith, and our affections wounded through a thousand pores instruct us to detest, is madness and folly.
<span>The correct answer is D. At the end of the story the tension between characters is reconciled by Okeke making the decision to travel to meet his grandchildren. This is a resolution that allows all the characters in the story to find closure, which offers satisfaction to the reader.</span>
