Answer: A,, “Last week he did fifty sit-ups a day, thinking that he would burn those already apparent ripples on his stomach to even deeper ripples, dark ones, so when he went swimming at the canal next summer, girls in cut-offs would notice."
Explanation: It was correct on the test. <3
B is the right answer I did that last week and had to study it
I think it's D, the others either don't have enough punctuation or they have too much
Answer: 1.) I went over to my aunt's house which I was very excited for since she was always so kind to me, with her gentle voice and sweet smile, eveything about her was amazing.
Once i walked through the dorr my face lights up.
I cant wait to spend time with her.
2.) I was walking to my aunts house.
Kicking the rocks at my feet taking a sigh, whishing i wasn't born, this women is Dreadful no one ever goes visit her just because of her attitude, she's so revolting I can't stand her just thinking about it makes me want to rip my hair out, once i open the door i can feel the bad vibes rushing towards me, causing chills to run up my spin, what a bad day this will be.
Explanation:it shows the way it effects the persons point of view, the way th aunt makes the person in the story feel.
Can u add and image of the story so we can read it?
