A writer create an individualistic storytelling experience by appealing to someones senses. By intricately describing the words to different basic senses in the body, sight smell feeling taste hearing.
The revision which makes the sentence more concise is 2: delete the phrase " and showed" which is not necessary when we already have the term "The display" that means that something is being exhibited, presented to view.
"We went to the Museum of Natural Science to see the new gem exhibit. The display included and showed minerals from all over the world. The most impressive part of the show was the extensive display of diamonds and other precious stones"
Not litter and pick up trash in streets, give food to homeless, donate stuff you don’t need, volunteer at shelters or places
Answer:
Well yes and no
Explanation:
Yes you can transition an idea to another in just one sentence, but if you want to go into brief about a little you can do more than one sentence but I would not recommend more than 2-3sentence of transitions though