<span>I think that if in your story the main character has a fight with unpleasant nature conditions such as cold environment that you mentioned, it must be an external conflict. Because the person is literary being under the pressure of the outside force and tries to survive. That fascinating struggle is frequeantly used as a plot twist that adds the dramatic action to the story and makes reader thrilled or excited.</span>
Answer:
one of them is a fragment, it's the latter sentence.
Explanation:
it seems that the second sentence has gotten it backwards.
the beginning part "especially when the wind picked up" is what makes it a fragment.
doesn't it make better sense if it were written in this way instead?
"the conditions were perfect for flying our kite, especially when the wind picked up."
Answer:
My tenant, Mr. Verma, pays the rent regularly.
or
Mr. Verma, my tenant, pays the rent regularly.
