During this stage, you look for and correct any mistakes you may have made, and/or change a few things to make the writing flow better. Hope this helps you!
Answer:
It seems, (Though it has been awhile since I have had read this story) that she is more open to the oddness of the place. Instead of trying to rationalize this she is only going along with it.
Explanation:
Hi, it is A. Hope I helped!
I don’t know what you mean by this can you reword it?
