1) The improvement which was done to the bolded section in the sentence to make it correct is : Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns. As it shown in the example, there is no need to duplicate the subject 'father' as it is clear to which word the pronoun 'he' relates. We always try to enrich our speech, so it's better to say the same thing in synonymous form:hates is replaced with dislikes - all in all it sounds good, looks natural and preserves the meaning of the first sentence.
<span>2) The sentence which should be revised to eliminate redundancy is With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately. A redundancy in a sentence is when something is repeated for no reason, when there is obvious detail that brings no sense and can be omitted. From the first sentence we know that sirens were needed, so there is no need to repeat that. </span>
<span>3) The statement which best describes how this sentence can be made more concise is : It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness. The phrase from which the sentence is started is quite long, and according to its meaning, there is a better (shorter) equivalent, which is 'if'. Now it is concise : If spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.</span>
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A noun is a word that functions as the name of a specific object or set of objects, such as living creatures, places, actions, qualities, states of existence, or ideas. However, a noun is not a semantic category, so that it cannot be characterized in terms of its meaning.
The above question wants to analyze your reading and writing skills. For that reason, it is not right that I write the essay for you, but I will show you how to write it.
First, you should read the research sources presented in the question. These sources will provide an information base and provide textual evidence for your essay.
After that, you can write your essay.
<h3>Steps to write an essay:</h3>
- Introduction: Introduce what the transformational journey is and how it is established in the literature. This paragraph should be short and 3-4 lines long.
- Body: Write between 2-3 paragraphs. In these paragraphs, you will show how the transformational journey concept fits into the stories of Marco Polo, Nelson Mandela, and Odysseus. You can write a paragraph for each of them, the important thing is that you emphasize how their lives and the actions they promoted fit into the concept of transformational journey. The information for these paragraphs will be in the research sources.
- Conclusion: Summarize all the information you have presented, to reinforce the meaning of the transformational journey and how significant it is to readers.
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