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Answer:</h3>
Correct formal email:
Hello Dr. Jones,
Many of the students at my school are interested in learning more about improving their health. However, at this time, our school only offers one semester of health class. Our student council decided it would be a good idea to bring in experts, such as you, as part of a lecture series on maintaining physical fitness. If you would like to participate, please contact me within the next month.
Sincerely yours,
Joey
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Explanation:</h3>
First mistake correction: When saying 'hello', you must not use a hyphen (-) or em dash (—
). Instead, you put a comma and then continue with the rest of the email after a line space.
Second mistake correction: When saying the regards, or 'sincerely yours', you can't use a colon (:) after it. You have to, again, use a comma after, go to the next line, and then put in your name. You should preferably use the full name however. You can see what I mean in the corrected email above.
Note: It is recommended to use 'dear' in place of 'hello' in a formal email.
I hope this helps! :)
-Bella
<em>BrainlyBluebell</em>
The term "philosophy" means, "love of wisdom."
In a broad sense, philosophy is an activity people undertake when they seek to understand fundamental truths about themselves, the world in which they live, and their relationships with the world and with each other.
<h3>How does the excerpt reflect Rand's philosophy of Objectivism? </h3>
It reinforces the concept that man's responsibility is to create his reality.
It supports the idea that man is truly in control of his thoughts and actions.
For more information about philosophy, refer to the link:-
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An example of parallelism in rhetoric in the speech "I have a dream": "I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.
<u>Explanation:</u>
In language structure, parallelism, otherwise called equal structure or equal development, is an equalization inside at least one sentences of comparable expressions or statements that have the equivalent syntactic structure. The use of parallelism influences intelligibility and may make writings simpler to process.
It makes a huge impact on the passage or the part of the literature where ever it is used. The most important impact is that it creates simplicity and reduces the complexity in the text which makes it easier for the reader to grab the idea of the text.
<span>perturbation is a long one you can use.</span>
