Where is the book or the chapter
A good thesis would be that Wolves hunt in a pack
A compare-and-contrast essay is a style of essay that points out the similarities and differences between two or more subjects. It's ideal for showing what separates and unites related things or concepts, particularly if the subjects are often confused for each other or unjustly lumped together.
I think it may be a bit long depending on how much your teacher wants and you get to the point vaguely but overall it’s pretty good. better than what i would’ve put