In a well-developed paragraph, identify what technique the author uses to begin the story in the above excerpt. Explain why the
author would choose to begin the story in this manner. What effect does it have on the reader? Be sure to use examples from the text to support your ideas. The race official waved the checkered flag. The race was too close to call! It was a photo finish! For the first time in racing history, it looked like there might be a three way tie. Race officials would need to review the footage to be sure. Tony began to think about all he had gone through to get to this point.
The evidence used in the paragraph is from a personal view point, but also from a peer point of view. They have seen this not just in their life, but others. This cuts down on the bias. <span />
