<span>Usher is a painter and he shares his art with the narrator. They also read poetry, stories, and share music.</span>
If you want to get a reader's attention you would might like to use a sentence that has purpose or something that can suprise the reader and interest them to read deeper,
like:the ice melts quickly on the river over the warm dry sun...
Answer:
Where is the passage? This is impossible to help
Typically when the narrator uses information that you could probably find somewhere trustworthy, like a textbook and goes on to give specific information that you would need to know for a unit or group of tests. For example, if the passage says "Christopher Columbus didn't actually mean to find the Americas, I guess you could say it was a happy mistake." That would be academic.
The meaning of elibriate is to expound upon an idea or tell a story in far too much detail or for the thousandth time.