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I made a trip to mexico last year. We plan a trip first. We have tickets to go on a cruise. Then we packed, my mother organized my suitcase. My entire family was on the cruise. With me was my aunt, my uncle and two cousins. Also my grandparents and, of course, my parents. We travel in an incredible boat. It was too big. We got off the cruise in Mexico and had an Adventure. My family and I were on the cruise for 5 days out and 7 days returning. It was fun.