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Drupady [299]
3 years ago
5

How can I fix this short essay?

English
1 answer:
Sav [38]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

Don't start sentences with how or but. it needs commas. and some of them sound like incomplete sentences/ thoughts. Attach some of the sentences together.

Explanation:

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