I believe it’s Maya Angelou
Answer:
Yes I enjoyed it because Kiffo finally meets a worthy opponent for his tormenting. Such a fun read and always keeps you on your toes.
Explanation:
First, I need to know which word is the underlined one?
I think maybe, the issue is the lack of emotional resonance, and the use of terms like “or anything”. Younger people tend to use these terms, and have less power in the emotional realm, at least when it comes to expressing themselves. So, maybe try lessening the terms that are flounce-y and deepen the emotional aspect of this essay, possibly? Just suggestions from an outside eye, good luck!