Answer:
the angry man said don't talk nonsense
somethings not "write" in the town . Change it to right
Last sentence after Nevertheless it needs a comma
Second sentence Thoughts rushed "threw" jacks mind. Change it to through
2. I had worn blue shoes.
3. The table had been cleaned by Joe.
4. The key had been lost by us.
5. A fight had been started by them.
7. The window had not been closed by me.
8. The paper had not been bought by them.
9. I had not been noticed by her.
10. Had the problem been solved by her?