Question

Thesis statement: Although many young people want to leave their family home immediately after high school, the transition can be quite difficult. I. cooking A. How much does it cost? B. How much time/effort does it require? c. how healthy is it II. cleaning a. Common areas a. Bathroom b. Clothes 3. bill-paying A. creating a budget B. Planning for future expenses What changes would you need to make to the outline to make it follow correct outline structure?

Answer 1

Change how much time and effort is required to something else.

Answer 2

The correct answer is planning for future expenses.

To follow the correct outline structure, the changes would be to add “planning for future expenses”.

This is so because you have to follow the correct structure that precedes the ideas. So, 3.- Bill-paying. A) Creating a Budget. B) Planning for future expenses. This continues the correct writing, it is nthe next logical step and respects the idea stated in the statement.