Question

Which sentence should be revised for clarity?

Answer 1

Answer:

Eliminating immigration from Asia, it also limited immigration from Europe, Russia and Italy in particular.

Explanation:

The sentence chosen wrongly separates the subject from the predicate with a comma and introduces the pronoun it when it is not unnecessary. The reason for that is that the sentence already contains a subject: Eliminating immigration from Asia. As a result, the use of the pronoun it immediately after the subject is not required. Thus, the correct version of the sentence is the following:

Eliminating immigration from Asia also limited immigration from Europe, Russia and Italy in particular.

Answer 2

The very last sentence "Eliminating immigration from Asia, it also limited immigration from Europe, Russia, and Italy in particular"