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Pachacha [2.7K]
3 years ago
12

Which sentence should be revised for clarity?

English
2 answers:
sladkih [1.3K]3 years ago
6 0

Answer:

Eliminating immigration from Asia, it also limited immigration from Europe, Russia and Italy in particular.

Explanation:

The sentence chosen wrongly separates the subject from the predicate with a comma and introduces the pronoun <em>it </em>when it is not unnecessary. The reason for that is that the sentence already contains a subject: <em>Eliminating immigration from Asia</em>. As a result, the use of the pronoun <em>it </em>immediately after the subject is not required. Thus, the correct version of the sentence is the following:

<em>Eliminating immigration from Asia also limited immigration from Europe, Russia and Italy in particular. </em>

Fudgin [204]3 years ago
6 0
The very last sentence "Eliminating immigration from Asia, it also limited immigration from Europe, Russia, and Italy in particular"

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