Which sentence should be revised for clarity?

English

2 answers:

sladkih [1.3K]3 years ago

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Answer:

Eliminating immigration from Asia, it also limited immigration from Europe, Russia and Italy in particular.

Explanation:

The sentence chosen wrongly separates the subject from the predicate with a comma and introduces the pronoun it when it is not unnecessary. The reason for that is that the sentence already contains a subject: Eliminating immigration from Asia. As a result, the use of the pronoun it immediately after the subject is not required. Thus, the correct version of the sentence is the following:

Eliminating immigration from Asia also limited immigration from Europe, Russia and Italy in particular. 

Fudgin [204]3 years ago

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The very last sentence "Eliminating immigration from Asia, it also limited immigration from Europe, Russia, and Italy in particular"

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